Reviews...

Goku
He had a post called "Remember"

I really liked it because he had this picture to go with it. It said Remember who you wanted to be. It went so well with what he was saying in his writing. His writing was very strong. A lot of his lines are things that not only me but others can relate to as well, which I believe makes writing stronger and grabs readers.

Word of Dave

They quoted a little poem called "Emergence".

It was very good. Had a really strong visual to the words for me. I liked the line that said "I'll wait for you in nowhere..... running and not knowing why."

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Best Friend Poem:
I loved this it was probably the cutest thing I've ever read. The picture really made the poem, they worked perfect together. 

Buddy's Poem..

Sweet

The steel has not made me cold

Nor the stone made me hard

Nor the gray made me colorless.

The dopefiends have not made me scandalous

Nor the cops made me hateful

Nor the hateful made me heartless.

The food has not killed my appetite

Nor sexlessness killed my desire

Nor lifelessness killed my thirst.

They gave me no water for my garden,

Gave me sand for seeds,

And I grew flowers

And low fruit,

Enough to color the walls

And make stale rice

Taste sweet.